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Will people eventually stop believing in religion?

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It is a difficult question to answer because I haven't thought about it. But I'm wondering if people will stop believing in their religion. I think that the older people are, the more they depend on something powerful. So as some people become older, they become more faithful to their gods and religions. And religious groups also try to unity their believers with various activities and programs as well as religious services. So it's not easy for them to stop believing.

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Hello, Gi Yean!
Thank you for doing your homework. I totally agree! The older we get, the more we tend to want to believe in something, and perhaps that's why when you go to churches, most of the members are adults. I think religion is okay as long as you can still distinguish between right and wrong and not follow blindly.
- T. Caitlyn
It is a difficult question to answer because I haven't thought about it. 
>> CORRECT
But I'm wondering if people will stop believing in their religion. 
>> CORRECT
I think that the older people are, the more they depend on something powerful. 
>> CORRECT
So as some people become older, they become more faithful to their gods and religions. 
>> CORRECT
And religious groups also try to unity their believers with various activities and programs as well as religious services.
>> And religious groups also try to unify their believers with various activities and programs as well as religious services.
 So it's not easy for them to stop believing.
>> CORRECT
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