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Alcohol help getting know each other.
When we are drinking, we can easily show their deep mind.
It could be mistake themselves.
But we usually forgive them such as the situation.

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Ms. Sunny!
Thank you for sharing this. I agree with you, like in other countries, a bar is the best place to meet a new person. Alcohol connects people. Have a great day!
Aki~

Alcohol help getting know each other.
>>> Alcohol helps to know each other

When we are drinking, we can easily show their deep mind.
>>>  When we are drinking, we can easily express our thoughts.

It could be mistake themselves.
>>> They could make a mistake among themselves.

But we usually forgive them such as the situation.
>>> But we usually forgive them in such a situation.
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