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What are the best and worst things about weddings?

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The best wedding I personally think is an outdoor wedding when the weather is very nice. A firework would also work, it could be better. But the worst wedding is the same as the best thing. If the weather doesn't work as your plan like heavy rain. It could be the worst thing for your life. :)

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Good day, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


The best wedding I personally think is an outdoor wedding when the weather is very nice. 
>> CORRECT!
A firework would also work, it could be better. 
>> CORRECT!
But the worst wedding is the same as the best thing. 
>> CORRECT!
If the weather doesn't work as your plan like heavy rain. 
>> If the weather doesn't go with your plan, it can get worse.
It could be the worst thing for your life. :)
>> CORRECT!

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