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I am not influenced by others.
So I sometimes heard that I am stubborn.
That¡¯s my weakness.
I think I am a influencer type.
People often ask for advice their problem from me.
They consider me objective person.

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Hello there, Ms. Sunny!
People who are not easily influenced by others are seen in a negative way. We can be like that but learn the proper way by choosing the correct words and how to decline. Misunderstandings happen because of the wrong approach and way. 
Aki~

I am not influenced by others.
>>> CORRECT!

So I sometimes heard that I am stubborn.
>>> CORRECT!

That¡¯s my weakness.
>>> CORRECT!

I think I am a influencer type.
>>>  I think I am an influencer type.

People often ask for advice their problem from me.
>>> People often ask for advice on their problems from me.

They consider me objective person.
>>> They consider me an objective person.


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