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회원님의 영작문

~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Why do you think people are afraid of going to the dentist?

There are many people have afraid of going to the dentist.
These days, many people call it Dental Phobia.
Among them, children are the most difficult to care.
Because, almost children have dental fears.
When they doing dental surgery, they are doing body resist like a scream yell or don't opening their mouths.
Some adult regret enduring pain because they are afraid of dental.
I think the biggest reason why fear of the dental is that pain and sound are scary.
During the treatment of surgery at the dental, we feel big pain and big stress.
And also afraid that when a dental tools comes in to my mouth, I feel hard to breath and afraid that it will hurt
with scary sound.
So, I think these reason are most people don't want to go there.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good day, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Why do you think people are afraid of going to the dentist?

There are many people have afraid of going to the dentist.
>> There are many people who are afraid of going to the dentist.
These days, many people call it Dental Phobia.
>> CORRECT!
Among them, children are the most difficult to care.
>> Among them, children are the most difficult to take care of.
Because, almost children have dental fears.
>> Because, almost all children have dental fears.
OR >> It's because most children have dental fears.
When they doing dental surgery, they are doing body resist like a scream yell or don't opening their mouths.
>> When they are undergoing dental surgery, they resist by moving their bodies, like screaming or not opening their mouths.
Some adult regret enduring pain because they are afraid of dental.
>> Some adults regret enduring pain because they are afraid of dentists.
I think the biggest reason why fear of the dental is that pain and sound are scary.
>> I think the biggest reason why people fear dentists is because of the pain, and the sound is scary.
During the treatment of surgery at the dental, we feel big pain and big stress.
>> During the treatment or surgery at the dental clinic, we feel a lot of pain and stress.
And also afraid that when a dental tools comes in to my mouth, I feel hard to breath and afraid that it will hurt with scary sound.
>> People are also afraid that when dental tools go in to their mouths they feel difficulty of breathing and are afraid that it will hurt because of the scary sounds.
So, I think these reason are most people don't want to go there.
>> So, I think these are the reasons why most people don't want to go there.

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