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My favorite character is always trying for dreams and taking care of people around me.
Because I don't have the courage to be sincere, so I like characters who are sincere and take good care of their surroundings.

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Hello Da Hye,   

I'm so glad to hear that your favorite character is someone who is always trying for their dreams and taking care of the people around them. It's important to have role models who inspire us to be the best versions of ourselves. I understand that it can be difficult to be sincere, but it's a quality that is worth cultivating. When we are sincere, we are genuine and honest with others. We build trust and stronger relationships. I admire you for being able to see the good in others. It shows that you have a kind and compassionate heart. Keep being yourself and following your dreams!

~Teacher Cathy

 

My favorite character is always trying for dreams and taking care of people around me.

>>My favorite character always strives for dreams and takes care of the people around them.

Because I don't have the courage to be sincere, so I like characters who are sincere and take good care of their surroundings.

>>Since I lack the courage to be sincere, I admire characters who are genuine and take good care of their surroundings.

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