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My favorite food (Homework)

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2023-10-06 3157

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My one of favorite food is a smoked duck.
The cuisine is really easy to cook.
Before cooking it, sliced onions should be needed.
After putting a smoked duck onto frying pan and being medium, it would be time to put sliced onions.
It might be good idea to add sausages in it.
Especially it tastes better with honey mustard sauce.
And it can be good cuisine for drinking alcohol.
Lastly It tastes the best if you mixed rice with the left duck meat.

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Thank you Han for sharing one of your best dishes. When I first heard about duck meat, I felt strange. But then I remembered, it's actually one of the meat dishes I like. It's called duck caldereta :D 
-Chammy
My one of favorite food is a smoked duck.

>> One of my favorite foods is smoked duck.

The cuisine is really easy to cook.

>>Correct

OR

>>This dish is really easy to cook.

Before cooking it, sliced onions should be needed.

>>Correct

OR

>>In cooking it, you need to prepare sliced onions.

After putting a smoked duck onto frying pan and being medium, it would be time to put sliced onions.

>> After putting a smoked duck in a frying pan and heating it to medium, it's time to add sliced onions.

OR

>> After putting a smoked duck in a frying pan and having reached the medium cook, it's time to add the sliced onions.

OR

>>Add sliced onions after a smoked duck has reached medium cooking temperature in a frying pan.

It might be good idea to add sausages in it.

>> It might be a good idea to add sausages to it.

Especially it tastes better with honey mustard sauce.

>>Correct

OR

>> It even tastes better especially if you put honey mustard sauce in it. 

And it can be good cuisine for drinking alcohol.

>> And it can be a good cuisine for drinking alcohol.

OR

>>It is good to pair with alcoholic beverages.

Lastly It tastes the best if you mixed rice with the left duck meat.

>> Lastly, it tastes best if you mix rice with the leftover duck meat.

OR

>> Lastly, mixing rice with the left duck meat tastes the best.

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