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What do you know about Australian culture?

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I know about Australia that was colonized from UK. And there is multicultural country like Singapore. Also, it's called an immigration country. Kangaroos and Koalas are very famous in there. In addition to that, I know it's an eco-friendly country. So, I'm really expected that I'm going to there. When I get there, I will send a lot of pictures to you. :)

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Good day, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


I know about Australia that was colonized from UK. 
>> What I know about Australia is that it was colonized by the UK. 
And there is multicultural country like Singapore. 
>> And that is a multicultural country like Singapore. 
Also, it's called an immigration country. 
>> CORRECT!
Kangaroos and Koalas are very famous in there. 
>> CORRECT!
In addition to that, I know it's an eco-friendly country. 
>> CORRECT!
So, I'm really expected that I'm going to there. 
>> So, I'm really expecting to go there soon. 
When I get there, I will send a lot of pictures to you. :)
>> CORRECT!
(Thank you for that! :D  ~ T. Camille)
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