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What do you think is the biggest change in how families are in your country?

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I think the first biggest change is a not taking care of their sick and old parents in person at the same house any more.
Generally, people send them some facilities which take care of the sick professionally.
The second biggest change is a getting increase one person-family.
It's not suprise that each four people in a family lives separately.

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Hello!


Thank you for accomplishing your tasks! Writing some sentences in English also contributes to your constant practice. Stay positive, work hard, and success will be knocking on your door. Keep up the good work! I believe in you. See you in class!


Regards,

Teacher Lexie



I think the first biggest change is a not taking care of their sick and old parents in person at the same house any more.
>> I think the first biggest change is no longer having to take care of their sick and old parents in person in the same house.
Generally, people send them some facilities which take care of the sick professionally.
>> Generally, people send them to some facilities that professionally take care of the sick.
The second biggest change is a getting increase one person-family.
>> The second biggest change is the increase in a solo-living setup.
It's not suprise that each four people in a family lives separately.
>> It's not a surprise that each of the four people in a family lives separately.
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