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What is your message to your fellow Koreans to stop pollution?

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We have to use carefully a resources to save the earth.
We shouldn't waste fossil fuels. and we have to stop using disposable items.

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Hi, JT!
Thank you so much for answering your homework :)
I really appreciate it!

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! 

-T.NIKKI ^^ 


We have to use carefully a resources to save the earth.
>> I will tell my fellow Koreans that we have to use our resources carefully to stop pollution and save the earth.


We shouldn't waste fossil fuels. and we have to stop using disposable items.

>> We shouldn't waste fossil fuels and we have to stop using disposable items.
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