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Hi.
How was your day?
Did you finish your chores?
I heard that my wife and daughters went to a plant park this morning.
Although she is sick, she seems to be doing her best for kids.
There were many patients today, but not too much as expected.
As you know, many companies, schools, and institutions had a long holiday includes yesterday and today.
I surmise that tomorrow will be hectic because of plenty of patients.
In addition, there are too many administrative work remained, and I have to do all those things tomorrow.
I should go to bed early today.
Regarding my homework, I think I got many talents from my parents.
I have a good ability to memorize and to concentrate with something.
Also, I have a good social skill that can along with a new person so easily.
Moreover, I am always looking for something interesting, and it makes me feel alive.
All these things are inheritances from my parents, I am sure.
How about you?
It is already too dark outside, and closing time is coming.
See you.

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Good evening, Dr. Kim!

I could not be any happier today! I finished cleaning all the ceilings and the walls of my first floor and it feels like I topped an exam. Right now, I still have a lot of energy in spite all the sweat and energy this afternoon.

Your wife had a quick recovery. I think Bo Ram is the best wife ever, you are very lucky. In the same way, your wife is truly lucky to have you as consistent, diligent, dedicated, and calm. Your family is your priceless treasure.

Since it's the final day of the long holiday, some just opted to rest and get set for tomorrow's hustle. Well, you had your peak yesterday and this shall keep your working condition in a balance. Tomorrow on your day off, Dr. MJ will take charge and he will be delighted to see many patients walk through your clinic.

For the homework, it is such a wonder how even tiny nuisance such as the way we smirk or we sleep in certain position comes from our parents. Even the loudness of our snore, the selection of our clothes, and the other minute details actually came either from our father or mother. When I am mad at my son, I sometimes made remarks that he got his unpleasant habit from his father. ^^ Well, this should make us realize that our behavior, skills, and thinking capacity root from our parents and no one else.

You surely inherited some good genes for being social and keen.  

Meanwhile, my father was obsessed with quality craftmanship. He made perfect tables, chairs, electric wirings, among others. He is so particular about details and I got all these from him. Meanwhile, my mother is extremely calm, wise, and pragmatic. I got these from her too. However, I can be impatient like my dad and stingy as my mother. ^^ 

Thank you for sending me your homework answer before the darkness set in your clinic. Your careful and interesting choice of words made your essay enjoyable to read and suggest on. Excellent craft!

See you.

-T. Donna~

Hi.
>> Correct!

How was your day?
>> Correct!

Did you finish your chores?
>> Correct!

I heard that my wife and daughters went to a plant park this morning.
>> Correct!

Although she is sick, she seems to be doing her best for kids.
>> Although she is sick, she seems to be doing her best for our kids.

There were many patients today, but not too much as expected.
>> Correct!

As you know, many companies, schools, and institutions had a long holiday includes yesterday and today.
>> As you know, many companies, schools, and institutions had a long holiday including yesterday and today.

I surmise that tomorrow will be hectic because of plenty of patients.
>> Correct! Good use of new vocabulary!

In addition, there are too many administrative work remained, and I have to do all those things tomorrow.
>> In addition, there are too many administrative work that remained, and I have to do all those things tomorrow.

I should go to bed early today.
>> Correct!

Regarding my homework, I think I got many talents from my parents.
>> Correct!

I have a good ability to memorize and to concentrate with something.
>> I have a good ability to memorize and to concentrate (with/on) something.

Also, I have a good social skill that can along with a new person so easily.
>> Also, I have a good social skill that can get along with a new person so easily.

Moreover, I am always looking for something interesting, and it makes me feel alive.
>> Correct!

All these things are inheritances from my parents, I am sure.
>> Correct!

How about you?
>> Correct!

It is already too dark outside, and closing time is coming.
>> Correct!

See you
>> See you.
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