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Do you think the governments should encourage public transport more?

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Of course yes!
I think the governments should constantly study for efficient public transport system to increase using that.
Well organized public transport can save the money and time.
Also it help to reduce air polution and traffic jam.

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Of course yes!
>> GOOD!
I think the governments should constantly study for efficient public transport system to increase using that.
>> I think the governments should constantly study for an efficient public transport system to increase the number of people who use it.
Well organized public transport can save the money and time.
>> Well-organized public transport can save money and time.
Also it help to reduce air polution and traffic jam.
>> It also helps to reduce air pollution and traffic jams.
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