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Where do you envision yourself in terms of your career in the next 5 years?

작성자: 이*윤
2023-10-02 2190

회원님의 영작문

I will expect my job to have a very good prospect in the future.
The world is rapidly, unepectedly changing and needs a lot of information.
Now, in the fourth industrial revolution, computers can do many things.
Because it can handle the Internet, which is now common, the web, and the homepage, and it can be varied from developing apps, including a small world smartphone in my hand.
In addition, I think people who are good at computers or those who majored in computers will be needed because they can expand thier knowledge from promising companies such as Apple, Google to the artificial intelligence that they are paying attention to.
Therefore, I think the promising for the future will be good.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Yun! Without a doubt, what you have said is certainly true. As we continue to advance in our technological era, technology-related jobs will be in even higher demand, which will undoubtedly benefit you as well. I'm glad to see you're maintaining a positive outlook for your promising future. That should be it. Keep thriving! Thanks for this, Yun. See you in our next class. 
~T. Jade^^
Homework: Where do you envision yourself in terms of your career in the next 5 years?
I will expect my job to have a very good prospect in the future.
>> Correct
>> OR: I expect my job to have a very promising future.
The world is rapidly, unepectedly changing and needs a lot of information.
>> The world is rapidly and unexpectedly changing, requiring a lot of information.
Now, in the fourth industrial revolution, computers can do many things.
>> Correct
Because it can handle the Internet, which is now common, the web, and the homepage, and it can be varied from developing apps, including a small world smartphone in my hand.
>> Correct
>> OR: Because it can handle the Internet, which is now common, the web, and the homepage, and it can encompass various tasks, including app development, even in the small world of a smartphone in my hand.
In addition, I think people who are good at computers or those who majored in computers will be needed because they can expand thier knowledge from promising companies such as Apple, Google to the artificial intelligence that they are paying attention to.
>> Additionally, I believe that people who excel in computer skills or those who have majored in computer science will be in high demand because they can expand their knowledge working for promising companies like Apple and Google, which are investing in artificial intelligence.
>> OR: Additionally, those skilled in computers or with computer science majors will be in demand due to their ability to leverage their expertise in companies like Apple and Google, which are investing in artificial intelligence.
Therefore, I think the promising for the future will be good.
>> Therefore, I believe the future prospects will be promising.

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