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When do you prefer to have a family gathering?

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I think that the perfect day for a family gathering is some of day in the mid of Spring or Autumn.
Because that season's weather is good to go on a picnic and to cook a large amount of food for feast. The date should be make a decision with each family discussion.
Further more, the day chosen individualy is not to need to worry about traffic jam and crowded

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I think that the perfect day for a family gathering is some of day in the mid of Spring or Autumn.
>> I think that the perfect day for a family gathering is a day in the mid of Spring or Autumn.
Because that season's weather is good to go on a picnic and to cook a large amount of food for feast.
>> 
Because of the season's good weather, it is good to go on a picnic and cook a large amount of food for a feast.
The date should be make a decision with each family discussion.
>> 
The date should be decided in a family discussion.
Further more, the day chosen individualy is not to need to worry about traffic jam and crowded.
>> 
Further more, the chosen dates should be free from traffic jams and crowded days.
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