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Is there a particular song that always puts you in a good mood? If yes, what is it, and explain why

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2023-09-28 752

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Have a great time with your family this Chuseok and I will miss you so much!!

From. Yun^^

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Hi, Yun! I know all of the songs you have mentioned except for Schumann's. You certainly have a great music taste! I also love that you appreciate various genres of music. You are wonderful. I missed you too. See you tomorrow! 
~T. Jade^^
Homework: Is there a particular song that always puts you in a good mood? If yes, what is it, and explain why?

There are so many that I've selected top five songs.

>> There are so many that I've selected the top five songs.

First, it is a song called "A Good Day" of singer IU.

>> First, it is a song called "A Good Day" by singer IU.

IU is my favorite solo artist, and I love this song because I became her big fan with this song. 

>> Correct
>> OR: IU is my favorite solo artist, and I love this song because I became her big fan through this song. 

Also, I often listen to IU's three-tried high note, which is the highlight of the song, because it's attractive.

>> Correct

Second, it is a song called "Fighting" by SEVENTEEN's unit group, SEVENTEEN BSS. 

>> Correct

As you can see from the title of the song, it's a song that cheers you up, so I listen to it when I need to cheer up.

>> Correct

Third, Maroon 5's "Sugar".

>> Correct

This music video is about Maroon 5 member going to the wedding hall and singing a wedding song. 

>> This music video is about a Maroon 5 member going to the wedding hall and singing a wedding song.

It's a song with a fast tempo, so it's good to sing when I'm in a good mood.

>> Correct

Fourth, the OST of the movie "The greatest show man", "This is me"

>> Correct

I like the lyrics very much, and I like it because it is a song that gives courage to the underprivileged and can rasie my self-esteem high.

>> I like the lyrics very much, and I appreciate it because it is a song that gives courage to the underprivileged and can raise my self-esteem high.

>> OR: I like the lyrics very much, and I appreciate it because it is a song that gives courage to the underprivileged and can boost my self-esteem.

Lastly, it is a classic. 

>> Correct

Schumann's Troy Merai that it is good to listen to when you focus on something.

>> Schumann's "Träumerei" that is good to listen to when you need to focus on something.

For additional recommendations, I recommend Billie Eilish's "Bad Guy", Sam Smith's "I'm Not The Only One", Charlie Puth's "I Don't Think That I Like Her" and Luis Fonsi's "Despacito"

>> Correct

I attach the attached file because there are too many characters.

>> I've attached the file because there are too many characters.

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