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2023-09-26 1235

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Hello.
It's rainy all day.
How is your place?
I was in a bad mood somewhat lately.
I hope that this rain will wash my bad mood forever.
As I told you, the profit of the clinic is getting increased these days.
That's why Dr. MJ looked so happy.
I think that the relationship between him and me almost recovered.
He started to express his emotion and tried to share my life as before.
There was nothing special at the clinic today.
However, I was somewhat busy to prepare a monthly statistics.
Since we have a holiday from 28th to 30th this month, I should complete all my monthly calculation until tomorrow.
I really want to leave for my parent's house as soon as tomorrow's work will be finished.
Maybe, it will be hard for us to drive for more than five hours, but my wife and I can drive in turn every one or two hours.
We will enjoy eating, drinking and talking together there.
I hope there won't too many patients tomorrow because I need an energy to drive.
This is a secret to Dr. MJ.
See you.

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Good day, Dr. Kim!

I wish you a better weather for Chuseok. Ours is perfect, I could not wish for any better. 

We all experience mood swings like the weather sometimes. It can be our hormones, the occurrence of some events not in favor of our situation, among many other reasons. Actually, you are one of the most stable and consistent persons I know. I hope that you can determine the cause of your mood and eventually overcome it. Since your clinic situation is steady and doing great as well as your relations with Dr. MJ, it cannot be the source of your mood swing. 

But then, Chuseok is right around the corner and you will have replenished connections with your family, your parents, and everyone in attendance. This can make your mood lighter.

As what everyone does, this day may be extra busy for preparations for the holidays. Stay focused on your worksheets, and when the time is right, drive and have a pleasant Chuseok this year with your loved ones.

As for me, I will think of something useful to do. 

Thank you for your homework submission. You managed to use new expressions you never used before. Stay curious in speaking and writing news useful expressions for variations in your exposition.

Have a memorable Chuseok this year!

See you!

-T. Donna~


Hello.
>> Correct!

It's rainy all day.
>> Correct!
Or: It's been raining all day.

How is your place?
>> Correct!

I was in a bad mood somewhat lately.
>> Correct!

I hope that this rain will wash my bad mood forever.
>>Correct!

As I told you, the profit of the clinic is getting increased these days.
>> Correct!

That's why Dr. MJ looked so happy.
>> Correct!

I think that the relationship between him and me almost recovered.
>> Correct!

He started to express his emotion and tried to share my life as before.
>> Correct!

There was nothing special at the clinic today.
>> Correct!

However, I was somewhat busy to prepare a monthly statistics.
>> However, I was somewhat busy to prepare for the monthly statistics.

Since we have a holiday from 28th to 30th this month, I should complete all my monthly calculation until tomorrow.
>> Since we have a holiday from the 28th to 30th this month, I should complete all my monthly calculations until tomorrow.

I really want to leave for my parent's house as soon as tomorrow's work will be finished.
>> Correct!

Maybe, it will be hard for us to drive for more than five hours, but my wife and I can drive in turn every one or two hours.
>> Correct! Very good sentence!

We will enjoy eating, drinking and talking together there.
>> Correct!

I hope there won't too many patients tomorrow because I need an energy to drive.
>> I hope there won't be too many patients tomorrow because I need the energy to drive.

This is a secret to Dr. MJ.
>> This is a secret from Dr. MJ.

See you.
>> Correct!
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