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What is something that you are thankful for?

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I think my mom and dad is very thank.
My mom is thank you for giving birth to me and raise me.
And dad is thank you for giving birth and they raise me too.
And teachers are they taught me how to study.
These are I something tankful for.

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Hi Henry!

Thank you for doing your homework ^^

T. DON

I think my mom and dad is very thank.
My mom is thank you for giving birth to me and raise me.
And dad is thank you for giving birth and they raise me too.
And teachers are they taught me how to study.
These are I something tankful for.

>> I am thankful to my mom and my dad. I am thankful to my parents because she gave birth and raised me well. I am also thankful to my teachers because are taught me how to study and be good student. They are the people that I am thankful for.
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