¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

What was your best friendship? Are you still friends with him or her? What life lessons did you lear

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ½Å*¼·
2023-09-23 459

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

You know? I didn't know it's important to keep the relationship with my friends when I was younger. Because we always met at school. As I'm getting older, as we lose contact, we move away from each other and become each other. As looking that, I thought it's thankful to just stay around me.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hi Eric! 
Thank you for your diligence in completing your homework. Your commitment to your studies is commendable.Your dedication and effort in our class are truly appreciated. Thank you for your commitment to improving your language skills.
Sincerely,
^^ T. Ara

You know? I didn't know it's important to keep the relationship with my friends when I was younger. 
>> You know, I didn't realize how important it is to maintain relationships with my friends when I was younger (continue the sentence, don't put period anymore)
Because we always met at school. 
>> because we always met at school.
As I'm getting older, as we lose contact, we move away from each other and become each other. 
>> As I've gotten older, and as we've lost contact and moved away from each other,
As looking that, I thought it's thankful to just stay around me.
>> I've come to appreciate the value of just having them around me.

¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
132788 Homework ±è*´Ô ¿Ï·á 2023-11-28 949
132787 Connection between a person\'s lifestyle and the duration of his... ÀÌ*±Ô ¿Ï·á 2023-11-27 777
132786 Never ling ÃÖ*ȯ ¿Ï·á 2023-11-27 1320
132785 What¡¯s the biggest threat to society, knowledge or ignorance? À±*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2023-11-27 2
132784 One policy that I have failed to follow. ±è*ºó ¿Ï·á 2023-11-27 0
132783 homework 11.27 ÃÖ*Ç ¿Ï·á 2023-11-27 1431
132782 What are some of your short-term and long-term goals? ÀÌ*À± ¿Ï·á 2023-11-27 1552
132781 Homework ±è* ¿Ï·á 2023-11-27 0
132780 Homework È«*¼± ¿Ï·á 2023-11-27 2
132779 Homework È«*¼± ¿Ï·á 2023-11-27 1
132778 homework Á¤*È£ ¿Ï·á 2023-11-27 0
132777 What¡¯s the biggest threat to society, knowledge or ignorance? ¿¡*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2023-11-27 2
132776 HOMEWORK: Please write a short paragraph about \"Is math... ¾Ù* ¿Ï·á 2023-11-27 1
132775 homework Á¤*È£ ¿Ï·á 2023-11-27 0
132774 Homework ±è* ¿Ï·á 2023-11-27 0
132773 Homework ±è* ¿Ï·á 2023-11-27 0
132772 homework Á¤*¾È ¿Ï·á 2023-11-27 0
132771 Homework ±è*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-11-27 1720
132770 Homework ·ù*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-11-27 1054
132769 My own way to recover ÀÓ*Áø ¿Ï·á 2023-11-27 1021

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04