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What animal best represents you? Why?

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I think the animal that represents me is a mouse.
Because in Korea, there is the concept of a year of the animal according to the animal representing the year of birth.
A year of the animal is expressed in 12 animal, in order : rat, cow, tiger, rabbit, dragon, snake, horse, sheep, monkey, chichken, dog, and pig. The animal returns every 12 years.
I was born in the year of the rat. Because when I was born, rats were the representative animals.
Mickey Mouse, Tom and Jerry's Jerry are small and cute images, but I'm not as small and cute as the characters in the animation.
However, I hope that I wise and be clever like their character because they have a wise and are clever image.

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Hi, Yun! Mice are indeed wise and fast learners, just like you. Thanks for this. I hope you are having a great weekend! See you in our next class.
~T. Jade^^

Homework: What animal best represents you? Why?
I think the animal that represents me is a mouse.
>> Correct
Because in Korea, there is the concept of a year of the animal according to the animal representing the year of birth.
>> Because in Korea, there is the concept of the Year of the Animal, which is determined by the animal representing the year of birth.
A year of the animal is expressed in 12 animal, in order : rat, cow, tiger, rabbit, dragon, snake, horse, sheep, monkey, chichken, dog, and pig. 
>> A year of the animal is represented by 12 animals in order: rat, cow, tiger, rabbit, dragon, snake, horse, sheep, monkey, chicken, dog, and pig.
The animal returns every 12 years.
>> Correct
I was born in the year of the rat. 
>> Correct
Because when I was born, rats were the representative animals.
>> Correct
Mickey Mouse, Tom and Jerry's Jerry are small and cute images, but I'm not as small and cute as the characters in the animation.
>> Correct
>> OR: Mickey Mouse, Tom, and Jerry's Jerry are tiny and adorable, but I am not as small and adorable as the animated characters.
However, I hope that I wise and be clever like their character because they have a wise and are clever image.
>> However, I hope to be as wise and clever as their characters because they have a wise and clever image.
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