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What do you think future wars will be fought over?

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My answer is very simple. the cause of the war in the future is water, food and energy include the technology. In past century, the humankind fought with enemy for land or religions etc. However in the future, we, humankind, will face a very critical shortage of everything, above all the kind of resources for living, water, food.

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Hello Donald,

Your perspective on the potential causes of future wars is thought-provoking. It's true that as resources become scarcer, conflicts over essentials like water, food, and energy may increase. It's essential for us to work towards sustainable solutions to avoid such scenarios.

~Teacher Cathy

               

My answer is very simple.

>>CORRECT

OR>>My answer is really straightforward.

the cause of the war in the future is water, food and energy include the technology.

>>In the future, wars could be triggered by the scarcity of resources like water, food, energy, and technology

In past century, the humankind fought with enemy for land or religions etc.

>>In the past century, humans often engaged in conflict over land, religion, and other reasons.

However in the future, we, humankind, will face a very critical shortage of everything, above all the kind of resources for living, water, food.

>>However, in the future, humanity will confront a critical shortage of essential resources for survival, primarily water and food.

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