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Which family holiday is you favorite?

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My favorite family travels are Jejudo, Hong chon Vivaldy park.
In Jejudo, I did the experience of picking tangerins.
And there are Hala mountin.
And in the Hong chon vivaldy park, there are Inpinity pool.
And also a Ocean World too.
These are my family's favorite travel.

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Hi Henry!

See you tomorrow ^^

T. DON

My favorite family travels are Jejudo, Hong chon Vivaldy park.
In Jejudo, I did the experience of picking tangerins.
And there are Hala mountin.
And in the Hong chon vivaldy park, there are Inpinity pool.
And also a Ocean World too.
These are my family's favorite travel.

>> My favorite family travels are Jejudo and Hong chon Vivaldy park. In Jejudo, I  experienced picking tangerines. There is also the Hala mountian in Jejudo. In the Hong Chon Vivaldy park, there is the Infinity pool and Ocean World too. These are my family's favorite travels.
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