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A stressful job with very high pay or a relaxing job with considerably low pay? Why?

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Absolutely, it's a very high pay. You know, is it obviously? I'm pretty sure if you have that two options, you're going to choose the first. Also, if there are very stressful and hard jobs, I can hang in there. After resign, I could start to another work again.

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Hello Eric! Haha! I like your answer! Very honest and straight to the point! By the way, well done on submitting your homework everyday! 
Sincerely, 
T. Ara


Absolutely, it's a very high pay. 
>>> Of course, I'll choose a stressful job with very high pay.
You know, is it obviously? I'm pretty sure if you have that two options, you're going to choose the first. 
>>> Isn't it obvious? I'm pretty sure if you have those two options, you're going to choose the first one also.
Also, if there are very stressful and hard jobs, I can hang in there. 
>>> If I get to experience a very stressful hard job, I think I'll hang in there and resign.
After resign, I could start to another work again.
>>> After that, I could find another job and start to work again.
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