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Can you think of a situation where being dependable is important?

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I think there are two main situations.
First, it's in an emergency.
I need to think that I can help people in needs, and I need strong faith in relief measures.
Because if I don't believe in relief measures, I may make mortal mistakes and I may not be able to protect savior's precious life.
Second, it's time to challenge something.
I think it's important to believe in myself when I'm challenging something.
Because I have to believe that I can do it, and that belief can lower my anxiety and gain self-confidence.
Also, sometimes the belief can be a motivation to challenge difficult things.

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Hi, Yun! You did great on this homework! ^^ Absolutely, being dependable is one of the greatest characteristics one can possess because it means you can be relied upon or trusted to consistently fulfill your commitments, responsibilities, or obligations. It's a great thing that people know they can trust you because of this skill. This may also certainly open up job opportunities and even lead to promotions if you are doing well. Thanks for this, Yun. See you in our class tomorrow~

~T. Jade^^
Homework: Can you think of a situation where being dependable is important?
I think there are two main situations.
>> Correct
First, it's in an emergency.
>> First, it's during an emergency.
I need to think that I can help people in needs, and I need strong faith in relief measures.
>> I need to think that I can help people in need, and I need strong faith in relief measures.
Because if I don't believe in relief measures, I may make mortal mistakes and I may not be able to protect savior's precious life.
>> Because if I don't believe in relief measures, I may make fatal mistakes, and I may not be able to protect a savior's precious life.
Second, it's time to challenge something.
>> Correct
I think it's important to believe in myself when I'm challenging something.
>> Correct
>> OR: I think it's important to believe in myself when I'm facing a challenge.

Because I have to believe that I can do it, and that belief can lower my anxiety and gain self-confidence.
>> Because I have to believe that I can do it, and that belief can reduce my anxiety and increase my self-confidence.
Also, sometimes the belief can be a motivation to challenge difficult things.
>> Correct

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