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I think he's probably embarrassed because the situation he wants didn't come out.
In fact, I think it's because the only people who are embarrassed when others are calm were the villains when they watched dramas or movies.

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Hello Da Hye,

Great job on your homework! I'm really impressed by your diligence and effort. Keep up the good work, and you'll continue to excel in your English studies. I'm proud of your progress!

~Teacher Cathy

 

I think he's probably embarrassed because the situation he wants didn't come out.

>>I think he's probably embarrassed because the situation he wanted didn't happen.

In fact, I think it's because the only people who are embarrassed when others are calm were the villains when they watched dramas or movies.

>>In fact, I think it's because the only people who get embarrassed when others stay calm are the villains in dramas or movies.

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