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It's an organ we need to live.
And some people made sad songs or books with the word heart.
As it is an important organ for us, it is also a term often used when we like someone or are hurt by someone's words with lyrics or descriptions in a book.

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Great job on your homework, Da Hye!

You've described the heart beautifully and its significance in our lives. Keep up the good work, and I'm excited to see more of your progress in our class. You're doing great!

~Teacher Cathy

 

It's an organ we need to live.

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OR>>It's a vital organ necessary for our survival.

And some people made sad songs or books with the word heart.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Some people create sad songs or books using the word heart.

As it is an important organ for us, it is also a term often used when we like someone or are hurt by someone's words with lyrics or descriptions in a book.

>>Because the heart is essential to us, it's frequently referenced when we have feelings for someone or when we're affected by someone's words in song lyrics or book descriptions.

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