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I don'r agree with this civil groups' claims.

Teenagers are a mismature times also they have curiocity about sex and gender too much.

They should learn sound gender perception, gen equality and correct medical sexual knowledge.

I know that some books make adolescents think homosexuality or free sex are progressive beaviors.

We should restrict indiscretion books for healthy growing of teengers.

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Thank you once again, Ms. Lily, for this.
I guess proper guidance about sex education for the young generation should be implemented. It's nice to allow them to use these materials to satisfy their curiosity and not experiment on their own by engaging themselves in teenage sexual activities. However, these should be talk in school with a teacher or a counselor.
Let's talk about that later.
Aki~

I don'r agree with this civil groups' claims.
>>> I don't agree with this civil group's claims.

Teenagers are a mismature times also they have curiocity about sex and gender too much.
>>>Teenagers are immature and they also have too much curiosity about sex and gender.

They should learn sound gender perception, gen equality and correct medical sexual knowledge.
>>>They should learn sound gender perception, equality, and correct medical sexual knowledge.

I know that some books make adolescents think homosexuality or free sex are progressive behaviors.
>>> CORRECT!

We should restrict indiscretion books for healthy growing of teengers.
>>> We should restrict indiscretion books for the health of growing teenagers.
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