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2023-09-17 1040

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Hello, T. Donna.
My precious weekend is almost gone.
A weird thing happened yesterday.
Do you remember Dr.Bae?
He didn't look cool in many aspects.
However, I changed my mind yesterday.
For holiday gift, he sent me a beef for grill, and I searched for the price in the internet shopping mall, and it proved to be almost one thousand dollars.
Of course, Dr. MJ recieved same gift from him.
We were so surprised how he could do this thing.
I invited my friend's family who lived near my house.
We really enjoyed grilled beef together with too much alcohol.
I drank whiskey, wine, and beer until 2 AM.
Hence, I worked while I was drunk, and I regretted it.
It was too hard to focus on my work today.
I should not have drank too much alcohol and should have slept early.
Regarding my homework, it was difficult to talk about something immediately with English.
But, I think I am getting better thanks to you.
Repetitive exposure of English is crucial, but we have many excuses that we can't.
See you.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Good afternoon, Dr. Kim!

The weekend went by in a snap of fingers. We are back to Monday once again and regardless of our body aches and whims for more days of rest, we need to keep pushing for our families. Well, Chuseok is just around the corner, so we can plan it ahead for some fun days of rest.

Dr. Bae seems to be a sweet person. As I mentioned in class, perhaps, his income got better, thanks to you and Dr. MJ for choosing him to take over your previous clinic. He has a good taste for food and he did not mind sharing it to the both of you as his token of appreciation after six months of transfer. Sometimes, weird people are actually pure and kind people. Time reveals who they truly are.

Meanwhile, your time with your friends with some spirits and food went a little bit overboard. However, we only live once, so if you had a blast, it was worth the late night and working sober. ^^

As you speak English everyday, it becomes so natural as breathing air. Since it is one of your best skills, you can showcase your speaking prowess anywhere you go in the world and connect to people instantly.

Thank you for your homework answer! I suppose you wrote this while you were so beat yesterday. The writing demonstrates clear thinking and accuracy. Great job!

See you later.

-T. Donna~

Hello, T. Donna.
>> Correct!

My precious weekend is almost gone.
>> Correct!

A weird thing happened yesterday.
>> Correct!

Do you remember Dr.Bae?
>> Correct!

He didn't look cool in many aspects.
>> Correct!

However, I changed my mind yesterday.
>> Correct!

For holiday gift, he sent me a beef for grill, and I searched for the price in the internet shopping mall, and it proved to be almost one thousand dollars.
>> For a holiday gift, he sent me a beef for grilling, and I searched for the price in the Internet shopping mall, and it proved to be almost one thousand dollars.

Of course, Dr. MJ recieved same gift from him.
>> Of course, Dr. MJ received the same gift from him.

We were so surprised how he could do this thing.
>> Correct!

I invited my friend's family who lived near my house.
>> Correct!

We really enjoyed grilled beef together with too much alcohol.
>> We really enjoyed grilling the beef together with too much alcohol.

I drank whiskey, wine, and beer until 2 AM.
>> Correct!

Hence, I worked while I was drunk, and I regretted it.
>> Correct!

It was too hard to focus on my work today.
>> Correct!

I should not have drank too much alcohol and should have slept early.
>> Correct! Very good sentence!

Regarding my homework, it was difficult to talk about something immediately with English.
>> Correct!

But, I think I am getting better thanks to you.
>> Correct!

Repetitive exposure of English is crucial, but we have many excuses that we can't.
>> Repetitive exposure to English is crucial, but we have many excuses why we can't.

See you.
>> Correct!
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