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What makes you want to go to school?

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I think the lunchtime and P.E class, and the location of my school make me go to school every day. Firstly, our school provide us with great meals for lunch and it is incredible actually. Every meals they serve are delicious. Sometimes they even offer fantastic fried chicken l¡¯m crazy about. Secondly, We have P.E class every single day. The good thing is we play dodge ball once every 2weeks on Monday. Another week, we play soccer game as well. Lastly, my school is right in front of my house, so as long as I run super fast, I can make it in 2minutes. I have never been late since I was first grade. I¡¯m really glad my school is so close. These are three reasons why I want to go to school every day.

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I think the lunchtime and P.E class, and the location of my school make me go to school every day. Firstly, our school provide us with great meals for lunch and it is incredible actually. Every meals they serve are delicious. Sometimes they even offer fantastic fried chicken l¡¯m crazy about. Secondly, We have P.E class every single day. The good thing is we play dodge ball once every 2weeks on Monday. Another week, we play soccer game as well. Lastly, my school is right in front of my house, so as long as I run super fast, I can make it in 2minutes. I have never been late since I was first grade. I¡¯m really glad my school is so close. These are three reasons why I want to go to school every day.

>> I think lunchtime and P.E class, and the location of my school make me go to school every day. Firstly, our school provides us with great meals for lunch and it is incredible actually. Every meals they serve are delicious. Sometimes they even offer fantastic fried chicken l¡¯m crazy about. Secondly, We have P.E. class every single day. The good thing is we play dodge ball once every 2 weeks on Monday. Another week, we play soccer game as well. Lastly, my school is right in front of my house, so as long as I run super fast, I can make it in 2 minutes. I have never been late since I was in first grade. I¡¯m really glad my school is so close. These are my three reasons why I want to go to school every day.
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