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Who do people need hobbies?

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I guess people who are making a living as workers. If you don't have any hobby, you can feel bored about your life after getting off. So, I like your hobby to play an acoustic guitar.

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Hi Eric!
Well done for always submtting your Homework everyday! Thank you for your time and for submitting your homeworks.
Sincerely,
T. Ara

I guess people who are making a living as workers. 
>>> I guess people who are busy and goes to work everyday are the ones who need hobbies the most.
If you don't have any hobby, you can feel bored about your life after getting off. 
>>> If you don't have any hobbies, you will be bored with your life after getting off. 
So, I like your hobby to play an acoustic guitar.
>>> So, I like your hobby of playing an acoustic guitar.
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