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1. Q: Could you tell me about your memorable graduation experience?
A: I graduated the university last year, but there was no graduation celebration. Because of covid-19.

2. Q: What did you do after graduating from primary school / middle school / high school / college?
A: I did achieve English test score after graduating college.

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Hello!


Thank you for completing your homework! Writing some sentences in English also contributes to your constant practice. Stay positive, work hard, and success will be knocking on your door. Keep up the good work! I believe in you. See you in class!



Regards,

Teacher Lexie




1. Q: Could you tell me about your memorable graduation experience?
A: I graduated the university last year, but there was no graduation celebration. Because of covid-19.
>>  I graduated university last year, but there was no graduation celebration because of covid-19.

2. Q: What did you do after graduating from primary school / middle school / high school / college?
A: I did achieve English test score after graduating college.
>> 
I did achieve an English test score after graduating college.
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