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Name two (2) advantages and two (2) disadvantages of traveling alone.

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One of advantages of traveling alone is that I don't need to take care of other's routine.
Another advantage is that I can completely focus on myself.
However, I can feel loneliness during traveling alone.
Also, It is quite dangerous for person who is traveling alone at late night.

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Good day, Tae Ho! ^^,)

Solo travel is usually an excellent opportunity to take a step back and review; it allows you to focus solely on yourself. You get to focus your own personal development as well as your mental and physical wellbeing. Some may see it as selfish (which can be a good thing), while others might describe it as a valuable type of self-care.

While solo travel is not inherently dangerous, it is significantly less safe than traveling with others, making safety a "con" of traveling alone. When you're alone, you're more vulnerable because you're the only one looking after yourself.

Thank you for answering your homework. Have a good day!^^

__T. Mayleen :)


One of advantages of traveling alone is that I don't need to take care of other's routine.
>>> One of the advantages of traveling alone is that I don't need to take care of other people's routines.
Another advantage is that I can completely focus on myself.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: Another benefit is that I can entirely concentrate on myself.
However, I can feel loneliness during traveling alone.
>>> However, I can feel lonely when traveling alone.
Also, It is quite dangerous for person who is traveling alone at late night.
>>> Also, it is quite dangerous for a person who is traveling alone at night.
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