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Korean public transportation

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Korea has a very excellent public transportation system. First, we have the most modernized and convenient subway and express train systems. For example, in Seoul, there are 9 lines of subways passing through in and around the city. Also we have a number of express trains, called Ktx, so we can go anywhere very quickly and easily. In addition, the time intervals between the trains are not long, so we don't need to wait for next one.
Besides our subway and trains, we have available regular buses and taxes.

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Happy Friday, Gi Yean!
Great job on your homework. You were able to tell me about the transportation system in Seoul, and I agree; you do have a great system! Just take note of some corrections. For your fourth sentence, that sentence is grammatically correct, but I just added some punctuation marks to make it better in writing. 
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Korea has a very excellent public transportation system. 
>> Korea has an excellent public transportation system.
First, we have the most modernized and convenient subway and express train systems. 
>> CORRECT
For example, in Seoul, there are 9 lines of subways passing through in and around the city. 
>> For example, in Seoul, there are 9 lines of subways passing through and around the city.
Also we have a number of express trains, called Ktx, so we can go anywhere very quickly and easily. 
>> Also, we have a number of express trains, called KTX, so we can go anywhere very quickly and easily.
In addition, the time intervals between the trains are not long, so we don't need to wait for next one.
>> In addition, the time intervals between the trains are not long, so we don't need to wait long for the next one.
Besides our subway and trains, we have available regular buses and taxes.
>> Besides our subways and trains, we also have regular buses and taxis available.
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