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The Human Right Committee always regards as important human right of criminals and perpetrators.

They seem to mistaken that such decisions are justice and protection for the social the weak.

It is the resulr the influence of the wrong dimocracy in Korea.

Besides it's a side wrong progressivism.

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Hi, Ms. Lily!
You are on point! I do not understand, why the government allows the action of this agency. One thing that I remember in the Philippines, during the pandemic, Human Rights intervened when people did not want to take vaccines. It was ridiculous.
Have a great day!
Aki~

The Human Right Committee always regards as important human right of criminals and perpetrators.
>>> The Human Rights Committee always regards the important human rights of criminals and perpetrators.

They seem to mistaken that such decisions are justice and protection for the social the weak.
>>> They seem to be mistaken that such decisions are justice and protection for the socially weak.

It is the resulr the influence of the wrong dimocracy in Korea.
>>> It is the result of the influence of the wrong democracy in Korea.

Besides it's a side wrong progressivism.
>>> CORRECT!

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