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Request to fix the grammar in the sentence.

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2023-09-12 1120

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Dear Cathy,

I would like to request that fix the grammar in the sentence. I will write the impression or opinion after completing the class everyday.
These days I'm listening the radio channel of English class when I drive to go to somewhere, I think it is helped grow up my English skill.
But the other hands, I'm also concerning about the stagnation of growth. Could you let me know the tip or advice about my point?

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Hello Donald,

Thank you for reaching out, and I appreciate your dedication to improving your English skills. I'm here to help you, and I'll gladly assist with your request to improve the grammar in your sentences. Let's work on it together! Regarding your practice of listening to the English class radio channel during your drives, that's a great way to enhance your language skills. It's wonderful to see your commitment to learning. Concerning your worry about a potential stagnation in your progress, don't be too hard on yourself. Learning a language is a journey with ups and downs. I can certainly provide some tips and advice to help you keep moving forward. Feel free to share more details about your specific concerns, and I'll do my best to assist you. Keep up the excellent work, and remember that continuous effort is the key to success in language learning.

~Teacher Cathy

 

I would like to request that fix the grammar in the sentence.

>>I would like to request that you fix the grammar in the sentence.

I will write the impression or opinion after completing the class everyday.

>> I will write my impression or opinion after completing the class every day.

These days I'm listening the radio channel of English class when I drive to go to somewhere, I think it is helped grow up my English skill.

>>These days, I listen to the radio channel of my English class when I drive somewhere.

>>I think it is helping me improve my English skills.

But the other hands, I'm also concerning about the stagnation of growth.

>>On the other hand, I am also concerned about the stagnation of my growth.

Could you let me know the tip or advice about my point?

>>Could you please let me know any tips or advice regarding this issue?

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