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Q.What do you think is the best job in the world? Why?
A.I think the best job is doctor, because they treats sick people. If the doctors has not in the world, all people will sick.

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Hi there Ann! Happy Wednesday! The best preparation for good work tomorrow is to do good work today. Have a good one!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
A.I think the best job is doctor because they treat sick people. 
>>>  CORRECT~!^^
If the doctors has not in the world, all people will sick.
>>>  If there are no doctors in the world, all people will get sick. 
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