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Can you describe a recent experience that taught you something valuable or changed your perspective

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I have a recent experience of changing my perspective on someone.
It's about first impressions, which is very common and happens a lot.
I am learning how to swim.
I met two people in the swimming pool, and their first impressions were scary.
So, I had a sense of distance, but I happened to talk about swimming.
Contrary to my expections, both of them kindly taught me about swimming and warmly told me what was wrong. They even encouraged me.
That's when I realized. First impressions were just first impressions. I shouldn't have judged people by their first impressions.
My view of the two has changed and they are now my best swimming seniors and teachers.

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Hi, Yun! That's a great lesson. It indeed applies to the saying, 'Don't judge a book by its cover.' I'm also glad you're having fun learning swimming with your seniors. That's lovely. Thanks for this, Yun. See you in our next class!

~T. Jade^^
Homework: Can you describe a recent experience that taught you something valuable or changed your perspective?
I have a recent experience of changing my perspective on someone.
>> Correct
It's about first impressions, which is very common and happens a lot.
>> It's about first impressions, which are very common and happen a lot.
I am learning how to swim.
>> Correct
I met two people in the swimming pool, and their first impressions were scary.
>> Correct
So, I had a sense of distance, but I happened to talk about swimming.
>> So, I felt distant, but I happened to talk with them about swimming.
Contrary to my expections, both of them kindly taught me about swimming and warmly told me what was wrong. 
>> Contrary to my expectations, both of them kindly taught me about swimming and warmly told me what was wrong.
They even encouraged me.
>> Correct
That's when I realized. 
>> That's when I realized that first impressions were just first impressions.
First impressions were just first impressions. 
>> Correct
I shouldn't have judged people by their first impressions.
>> Correct
My view of the two has changed and they are now my best swimming seniors and teachers.
>> Correct
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