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I have lost my transport ticket in Paris.
Because my jacket¡¯s pocket had a hole.
My ticket might be get out of my clothes.
My second son have experienced like me in sanfrancisco . The ticket was one day pass.
Sadly he stopped his traveling .
Because he can¡¯t control his mind.
It¡¯s too bad he spoiled traveling because of the small things.

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Good morning, Ms. Sunny!
There are certain things that are unavoidable but this kind of experience, losing your ticket, passport, or even your luggage can make or break you. In your son's experience, it became a traumatic experience for him. I hope he will have the courage to see the world again.
See you later
Aki~

I have lost my transport ticket in Paris.
>>> CORRECT!

Because my jacket¡¯s pocket had a hole.
>>> CORRECT!

My ticket might be get out of my clothes.
>>> My ticket might have slipped out of my jacket,

My second son have experienced like me in sanfrancisco . The ticket was one day pass.
>>> My second son has the same experience as me in San Francisco. The ticket was a day pass.

Sadly he stopped his traveling .
>>> Sadly he stopped traveling.

Because he can¡¯t control his mind
>>> CORRECT!

It¡¯s too bad he spoiled traveling because of the small things.
>>> CORRECT!


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