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What is the best way to spend the weekend for you?

작성자: 최*은
2023-09-11 1324

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about 2 years ago, one of the personal test, called MBTI was very popular among people. if i describe my personality with it, especially last letter "P" and "J", I am a planned person but my plan is always changable. So I make a lot of plans to do during weekend until friday. But on that day, I change my mind that I would hang out with my friends and stay at home whole day without thinking. I did same thing last weekend again. My friend asked me to hang out on Sunday. I gently rejected becasue I would have a late sleep with pajamas, not making up. Resting is good for the health but I sometimes feel it waste time. I have a regret at very late night. I don't know what is my problem.
so in my opinion, the best way to spend the weekend is outdoor activiting, even my body feel tired.

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Thank you for this Jenny!

about 2 years ago, one of the personal test, called MBTI was very popular among people. 
>>>  About 2 years ago, one of the personality tests called MBTI was very popular among people. 
if i describe my personality with it, especially last letter "P" and "J", I am a planned person but my plan is always changable. 
>>> If I describe my personality with it, especially the last letters "P" and "J", I am a planned person but my plan is always changeable. 
So I make a lot of plans to do during weekend until friday. 
>>> So I make a lot of plans to do during the weekend until Friday.  
But on that day, I change my mind that I would hang out with my friends and stay at home whole day without thinking. 
>>>  But on that day, I change my mind on hanging out with my friends and stay at home the whole day instead without any thoughts. 
I did same thing last weekend again. 
>>>  I did the same thing last weekend again. 
My friend asked me to hang out on Sunday. 
>>> correct 
I gently rejected becasue I would have a late sleep with pajamas, not making up. 
>>> I gently rejected because I would have to sleep late with pajamas and not having any make up.  
Resting is good for the health but I sometimes feel it waste time.
>>> Resting is good for the health but I sometimes feel it is a waste of time. 
I have a regret at very late night. 
>>> correct 
I don't know what is my problem.
>>> correct 
so in my opinion, the best way to spend the weekend is outdoor activiting, even my body feel tired.
>>>  So in my opinion, the best way to spend the weekend is do outdoor activities, even if my body feels tired.
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