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My favorite place to study

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My favorite place to study is our living room that is because my mom is always around there so I can ask her for my work everytime I have something that I have no idea. I think I can be nervous when I¡¯m studying because of my mom nearby. If I study in my room by myself I wouldn¡¯t less concentrate on it and look away. Besides the living room is large and I can see beautiful views like ocean, some yachts and boats on the sea and great buildings through the window. It looks like cyberpunk city and it helps me to more concentrate on studying.

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Hi Scott!

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My favorite place to study is our living room that is because my mom is always around there so I can ask her for my work everytime I have something that I have no idea. I think I can be nervous when I¡¯m studying because of my mom nearby. If I study in my room by myself I wouldn¡¯t less concentrate on it and look away. Besides the living room is large and I can see beautiful views like ocean, some yachts and boats on the sea and great buildings through the window. It looks like cyberpunk city and it helps me to more concentrate on studying.

>> My favorite place to study is our living room that is because my mom is always around there so I can ask her questions on my home work everytime I have something that I have no idea. I think I can be nervous when I¡¯m studying because of my mom who is nearby. If I study in my room by myself I couldn't concentrate. Besides the living room is large and I can see beautiful views like ocean, some yachts and boats on the sea and great buildings through the window. It looks like cyberpunk city and it helps me concentrate more when studying.
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