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What have you lost while traveling?

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What have you lost while traveling?

I¡¯ve lost transportation card while traveling.
It was confusing memory for me because me and my friend had next activity right after finishing now schedule. We also rushed to get the spot for activity.

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Hello!


Thank you for completing your homework! This kind of activity helps you to stay on track. Make English speaking and/or writing a daily habit of yours. It only seems impossible until it¡¯s 

done! So have faith you¡¯ll be better. Keep up the good work! I believe in you. See you in class!


Regards,

Teacher Lexie



What have you lost while traveling?
I¡¯ve lost transportation card while traveling.
>> I¡¯ve lost a transportation card while traveling.
It was confusing memory for me because me and my friend had next activity right after finishing now schedule.
>> It was a confusing memory for me because my friend and I had an activity right after the other.
We also rushed to get the spot for activity.
>> We also rushed to get a spot for some activities.
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