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How is going to a good university important in your country?

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Our country people think it is good to go to s good university. It's because they think it is the best way to get work. But these days, we say that it is unfair way to get work. Some people may didn't have a chance to go to a good university.

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Hi, Daisy. Thank you so much for doing your homework and for doing a great job in answering your homework. Keep up the good work and see you in class! ^^
-T. Julia
Our country people think it is good to go to s good university. 
>> People in our country believe that attending a good university is beneficial.
It's because they think it is the best way to get work.
>> Correct
OR >> They believe it is the most effective way to secure employment.
But these days, we say that it is unfair way to get work.
>> Correct
OR >> But nowadays, we consider it an unfair method of securing employment.
Some people may didn't have a chance to go to a good university.
>> Some people may not have had a chance to go to a good university.
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