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Why do you want to work for us?

작성자: 이*윤
2023-09-08 911

회원님의 영작문

After I just fresh graduate, I was lucky to have two years of many experience.
Unfortunately, I did many works by myself, and I was stressed out between professors and students in my preovious company.
But I didn't just suffer. I got the skill to handle things skillfully, and I took the skill to control disputes smoothly.
When I heard that you were looking for someone to join your company, I submitted my application right away.
Working with other people toward a team goal is something that I fiercely believe in. I'm a huge believer in the importance of teamwork, working in a your company suit me well.
Not only am I teah-savvy and energetic, experienced, I'm also enthusiastic and creative, high leadership.
I know that my skills can make me a valuable and perfect company member and help your company grow.
So, I can assure that I'll be the one who shines your company.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Yun! This is fantastic! There are just some grammar mistakes, and this could already be your spiel for this type of interview question. I would love to comment more regarding your answer, but I think it would be best to discuss it during our class. Thanks for this, and have a happy weekend!
~T. Jade^^
Why do you want to work for us?
After I just fresh graduate, I was lucky to have two years of many experience.
>> After I had just graduated, I was fortunate to gain two years of valuable experience.
Unfortunately, I did many works by myself, and I was stressed out between professors and students in my preovious company.
>> Unfortunately, I did a lot of work by myself, and I was stressed out dealing with professors and students in my previous company.
But I didn't just suffer.
>> Correct
I got the skill to handle things skillfully, and I took the skill to control disputes smoothly.
>> I acquired the ability to handle things adeptly and manage disputes smoothly.
When I heard that you were looking for someone to join your company, I submitted my application right away.
>> Correct
Working with other people toward a team goal is something that I fiercely believe in.
>> Correct
I'm a huge believer in the importance of teamwork, working in a your company suit me well.
>> I'm a huge believer in the importance of teamwork; working in your company suits me well.
Not only am I teah-savvy and energetic, experienced, I'm also enthusiastic and creative, high leadership.
>> Not only am I tech-savvy and experienced, but I'm also enthusiastic, creative, and possess strong leadership skills.
I know that my skills can make me a valuable and perfect company member and help your company grow.
>> Correct
So, I can assure that I'll be the one who shines your company.
>> So, I can assure you that I'll be the one who shines in your company.
>> OR: So, I can assure you that I will contribute significantly to the success of your company.
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