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Q. What and who are your major influences for having your recent interests?
A. There are many funny videos. So I think I'm influenced the most by youtubers

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Thank you for completing your homework! Writing some sentences in English also contributes to your constant practice. Stay positive, work hard, and success will be knocking on your door. Keep up the good work! I believe in you. See you in class!



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Teacher Lexie


Q. What and who are your major influences for having your recent interests?
A. There are many funny videos. So I think I'm influenced the most by Youtubers.
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