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Homework- What did you do last weekend?

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I visited Seoul Foreigner's Cemetery Park with my husband and friend last Sunday.
The most foreigners who were missionary helped Korea around one years ago.
They worked in various field like education, medical,religions and even independence of Korea. Korea was Japanese colony at that time.
It's very miserable era. The foreigners established a western type of school, medcal center, the press company..
We korean thanks to them at same time respect them.

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Thank you for completing your homework! This kind of activity helps you to stay on track. Make English speaking and/or writing a daily habit of yours. It only seems impossible until it¡¯s 

done! So have faith you¡¯ll be better. Keep up the good work! I believe in you. See you in class!


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I visited Seoul Foreigner's Cemetery Park with my husband and friend last Sunday.
>> CORRECT!
The most foreigners who were missionary helped Korea around one years ago.
>> Most foreigners who were missionaries helped Korea around one year ago. (Is this just one year ago?)
They worked in various field like education, medical,religions and even independence of Korea.
>> They worked in various fields like education, the medical field, religion, and even for the independence of Korea.
Korea was Japanese colony at that time.
>> Korea was a Japanese colony at that time.
It's very miserable era.
>> It was a very miserable era.
The foreigners established a western type of school, medcal center, the press company.
>> The foreigners established a Western type of school, a medical center, and a press company.
We korean thanks to them at same time respect them.
>> We, Koreans thank them and respect them at the same time.
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