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I think victims\' behavior will be limited if they are subjected to cyber violence.

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I think victims' behavior will be limited if they are subjected to cyber violence.
Violence is often encountered in one space.
I think it is a phenomenon that only occurs in certain places or members, such as school violence or domestic violence.
However, cyberbullying can be experienced wherever the Internet is available at any time, so victims can block all communication networks and hide in corners to isolate themselves.

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Hello Da Hye,

Great job on completing your homework! I appreciate your insights into the topic of cyber violence. You've expressed your thoughts very clearly. Keep up the excellent work! See you later! ^^

~Teacher Cathy

 

I think victims' behavior will be limited if they are subjected to cyber violence.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I believe that victims' behavior will be restricted if they experience cyber violence.

Violence is often encountered in one space.

>>Violence is frequently encountered in various contexts.

I think it is a phenomenon that only occurs in certain places or members, such as school violence or domestic violence.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I think it is a phenomenon that occurs specifically in certain situations or among particular individuals, such as school violence or domestic violence.

However, cyberbullying can be experienced wherever the Internet is available at any time, so victims can block all communication networks and hide in corners to isolate themselves.

>>CORRECT

OR>>However, cyberbullying can happen anywhere the Internet is accessible at any time. Therefore, victims may choose to block all communication networks and withdraw to isolate themselves.

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