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HOMEWORK for 09/05
Write 5-8 sentences
TOPIC: Do you think the quality of our sleep affects our life everyday? Why do you think so?

Yes I think sleeping is very impotant to our life because our body is healed during we sleep and if we don't have sleep maked a lot of trouble

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Hello, Min Seog! You have always been really diligent and dedicated in answering the homework I'm giving you. I would like to thank you for always exerting effort in this matter. We will keep on doing more activities that will help you enhance your skills even further. I'll just see you in class! ~ T. Marie ^^
Yes I think sleeping is very impotant to our life because our body is healed during we sleep and if we don't have sleep maked a lot of trouble
>> Yes, I think sleeping is very important in our lives because our body is being healed.
>> If we don't sleep, it will give us a lot of trouble.  
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