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The best way to revenge

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I thought the best way to revenge was "An eye for an eye, a tooth for a tooth" from the code of hammurabi. But I changed my mind that the best way to revenge is to live with happiness without people who make some problems. They must take the effects of Karma what goes around comes around.

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Hello, Thomas!

This is a very mature mindset of forgiveness. The best revenge is no revenge because people who love conflicts will always end up having more problems and unhappiness. 

Karma is real and you are just waiting for a good one to come and get you. Be prepared.

Congratulations for writing all sentences correctly! Kindly read a few suggestions I made.

See you later.

-T. Donna~

I thought the best way to revenge was "An eye for an eye, a tooth for a tooth" from the code of hammurabi. 
>> Correct!
Or: Hammurabi


But I changed my mind that the best way to revenge is to live with happiness without people who make some problems. 
>> Correct!

They must take the effects of Karma what goes around comes around.
>> Correct!
Or: They must take the effects of Karma- what goes around comes around.
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