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Please answer the question:
What is your opinion about giving tips? Are they good or bad? Why?


Giving tips culture is sometimes I think good culture, but I'm not sure it's good or not yet.
Because, there is no tip culture in Korea yet.
So most people are unfamiler this culture.
But, expensive cost restaurant and hotels they are asked tips.
Sometimes when I give a good services like a taxi, restaurant and store I give a tips for staff.
But, the problem is some employees take for granted tips
In addition, they are not provide good a service.
So, I'm not sure tip culture's good or bad.

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Good day, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What is your opinion about giving tips? Are they good or bad? Why?


Giving tips culture is sometimes I think good culture, but I'm not sure it's good or not yet.
>> Giving tips is sometimes I think a good culture, but I'm not sure if it's good or not yet.
OR >> Tipping culture is sometimes I think a good culture, but I'm not sure if it's good or not yet.
Because, there is no tip culture in Korea yet.
>> That's because there is no tipping culture in Korea yet.
So most people are unfamiler this culture.
>> So most people are unfamiliar with this culture.
But, expensive cost restaurant and hotels they are asked tips.
>> But, expensive restaurants and hotels ask for tips.
Sometimes when I give a good services like a taxi, restaurant and store I give a tips for staff.
>> Sometimes when I give a good services like taxis, restaurants and stores, I give a tip for the staff.
But, the problem is some employees take for granted tips
>> But, the problem is that some employees take tips for granted.
In addition, they are not provide good a service.
>> In addition, they do not provide good service.
So, I'm not sure tip culture's good or bad.
>> So, I'm not sure if tipping culture's good or bad.

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