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What are the good and bad things about traveling?

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Well, I guess there are many good things to travel such as relaxing, taking a rest, making the memories, and having an experience which I've never been. It seems that doing something I've never tried makes me interested in. Also, if someone who is suitable with me will trip anywhere, that will be worth it. On the other hand, I believe it will cost a lot for bad thing cases. In addition, it couldn't go well as my plan due to bad weather, accident, and some issues. And, I really hate people who pick on me. For example, when I travel with them, they tend to nag continuously.

* It was pleasure to have a class with you. And I hope we will meet again. :)

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Good day, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

Well, I guess there are many good things to travel such as relaxing, taking a rest, making the memories, and having an experience which I've never been. 
>> Well, I guess there are many good things to travel such as relaxing, taking a rest, making the memories, and having an experience which I've never experienced
It seems that doing something I've never tried makes me interested in. 
>> It seems that doing something I've never tried makes me interested in it
Also, if someone who is suitable with me will trip anywhere, that will be worth it. 
>> Also, if someone who is suitable with me will go on a trip anywhere, that will be worth it. 
On the other hand, I believe it will cost a lot for bad thing cases. 
>> CORRECT!
In addition, it couldn't go well as my plan due to bad weather, accident, and some issues.
>> CORRECT!
And, I really hate people who pick on me. 
>> CORRECT!
For example, when I travel with them, they tend to nag continuously.
>> CORRECT!

* It was pleasure to have a class with you. And I hope we will meet again. :)
[Thank you! I hope you would have a class with me again! :D  ~ T. Camille ]
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