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HOMEWORK: Writing Exercise: How do you manage your workweek and set realistic deadlines?

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one common reason for missing deadlines is poor time management. procrastination, distractions, and ineffective prioritization can cause tasks to take longer than expected and delay the overall project schedule. additionally, underestimating the time required for a task or failing to account for unexpected obstacles can lead to missed deadlines. so, I always check the deadlines for that week's work and finish my work in advance to prepare for unavoidable situations.

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Hi Young Taek!
This answer is spot on.
If you give this answer, you would truly impress your interviewer.
I just checked the capitalization here.
Other than that, this work is flawless.
Good job^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
one common reason for missing deadlines is poor time management. 
>> One common reason for missing deadlines is poor time management. 
procrastination, distractions, and ineffective prioritization can cause tasks to take longer than expected and delay the overall project schedule. 
>> Procrastination, distractions, and ineffective prioritization can cause tasks to take longer than expected and delay the overall project schedule. 
additionally, underestimating the time required for a task or failing to account for unexpected obstacles can lead to missed deadlines. 
>> Additionally, underestimating the time required for a task or failing to account for unexpected obstacles can lead to missed deadlines. 
so, I always check the deadlines for that week's work and finish my work in advance to prepare for unavoidable situations.
>> So, I always check the deadlines for that week's work and finish my work in advance to prepare for unavoidable situations.
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